Elevator Pitch No. 3 - Assignment 22
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For the last elevator pitch I got really positive feedback. My peers commented how I had a clear voice and explained my idea clearly. One of the comments suggested that I spoke louder, so this time I recorded a sample before hand to test the volume of my voice, to make sure I was speaking louder than last time.

Hey Maria,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch really improved! You seem very comfortable in front of the camera and you have an excited tone of voice. You spoke clearly and the information given was explanatory in context. I really like you idea, and hope you do develop it! I like the rhetorical questions as well (: Great job!